For this week’s prompt, I challenge you to use all five senses to describe your car. Sometimes, we overlook potential inspiration because we are too familiar with it. So sit in your vehicle of choice and write down what your senses take in. If you can work in taste, bonus points! The above photo is me in my Mom-mobile. Here’s what I sensed:
Sound: Windshield wipers working, Christian rock song on radio, kids chatter
Sight: Dust (My car really needs dusted and vaccuumed). Mystery book on dash. CDs on shelf. Dash illuminated. Driving through gray countryside as wet snowflakes fall.
Smell: Nothing special, although I have a terrible sense of smell.
Touch: Smooth steering wheel. Slick finish on dash controls.
Taste: Water and mint gum. (I usually carry those supplies in my car.)
Now how can I work these observations into a scene?
The windshield wipers whipped back and forth, back and forth, as the singer crooned on the radio a ballad.
My son said nothing.
What was wrong? Caden was always so chatty when I picked him up from school. Now all he did was trace lines in the dust on the dash.
The smooth steering wheel slid through my hands as I made the turn in our SUV.
“So what did you and your friends talk about at lunch today?” I said.
He shrugged, unwrapping a stick of wintergreen gum. “Stuff.” He scrunch down in the bucket seat.
The next song began in an upbeat tempo. But the atmosphere inside our SUV was anything but.
How would you describe your car using all five senses?