This month’s “Writing in Time” post was going to be about the beach and the sea as writing inspiration. But I ran into a problem. The beach left me completely uninspired. It’s not as if I haven’t done enough research. My family and I have gone to the North Carolina coast to visit my in-laws for years now. But the beach is relaxing, a giant sandbox for people of any age to enjoy. I’ve discovered I need settings that add tension to my writing, and the beach doesn’t do it for me.
But the sea … since I was twelve and went sailing with my cousin and her husband on their sailboat in Chesapeake Bay, I’ve been in love with ships and the sea. The might and the mystery of the sea fires my imagination. Below is inspiration for using the sea in speculative fiction, mysteries, and adventures.
I’ve only visited the beaches on the east coast of the U.S. where European settlers first arrived, leaving behind four hundred years of recorded history. That history infuses the area, making it perfect for a tale of time travel.
In North Carolina, my family and I stay at Emerald Isle, a barrier island near a maritime archaeology site. Experts believe they are excavating the ship Queen Anne’s Revenge, Blackbeard’s flagship. In a speculative story, an archaeologist finds a way to Blackbeard’s time—a portal or some item salvaged from the wreck. Blackbeard discovers the way and travels to our time. The archaeologist has to get Blackbeard back to the 18thcentury.
A monster story works so well in the sea because, unlike stories of lake monsters, the unexplored depths of the oceans gives a hint of reality to the idea of giant, undiscovered forms of sea life. A fantastic story based on some fact has always appealed to me. “The Foghorn”, a short story by Ray Bradbury, comes to mind.
The possibilities for this genre are nearly limitless. How many middle grade mysteries have centered around an old lighthouse or sunken treasure? Tons, but that doesn’t mean current authors can’t put a new spin on classic settings.
For adult stories, the episode “Shark Mountain” from the PBS show Nature inspired me. It featured Howard and Michele Hall, a couple who run Howard Hall Productions. They produce and direct underwater films. Michele is also an underwater photographer and logistics coordinator for their expeditions around the world as they travel for their films.
I would love to invent a couple like the Halls. In a foreign country, the couple record or photograph something dealing with a crime but don’t know it. Their boat is searched, a colleague is attacked. When the local police seem unconcerned or corrupt, the couple conduct their own investigation.
To give a mystery an eerie atmosphere, nothing beats a deserted boat. The crew of a fishing boat finds a deserted ship. They can bring it in to harbor and then mysterious events start occurring, like someone following the captain or the fishing boat is vandalized. Or after the crew finds that abandoned boat, another ship begins to chase them and it’s a battle of wits for the fishing crew to reach port safely. That storyline combines mystery and adventure, which leads me to my next genre …
When a writer sets a story in nature, she can count on using that element for all kinds of plot twists and tension.
Two of my favorite nonfiction books are The Boy Who Sailed Around the World Alone and Dove, both by Robin Lee Graham. The first is a children’s books, stuffed with photos and the latter is for adults. Both recount the adventure of the author who became the youngest person to solo around the world starting when he was sixteen in 1965 and ending in 1970.
Those books alone provide a host of story elements from falling into the sea while working on the ship, to losing the main mast, to experiencing star-spangled nights on a still sea.
I could incorporate or adapt those real world experiences into a story involving a teen trying to sail around the world in the 21stcentury.
For more ideas about how to use August as writing inspiration, click on my 2019 post and my 2018 post.
How can you use the beach and the sea as writing inspiration?
Those are great tips. I enjoy the use of nature – like you said, I can get a lot from it, adventure, fantasy, romance, horror, it doesn’t matter what, nature has it. But come to think of it, I don’t have beaches, or the sea as part of any of my stories, save for perhaps a background to a scene or two.
Thank you! As much as I love the sea, I found this post hard to write. I had to sit down and dig into it, and the ideas started to come. Maybe that’s what you need to do. Start a scene with the sea or beach and explore it.
Appreciate this post. You’ve got me thinking…. 🌷
This is a fun post. I love the water, even though I’m not a good swimmer. All my stories feature a natural body of water, from a pond or river to an ocean.
Thank you! It was fun to write once I got going. That’s cool you include natural bodies of water in all your stories.
These are awesome ideas! The closest I’ve been to any ocean was Boston Harbor on a high school band trip, so I haven’t thought about writing a story set on the sea. I do have a future WIP idea about lifeguards, but I’d have to do tons of research to have them by the ocean since the beaches in the midwest have a walkable perimeter. Although there are the Great Lakes, and I’ve seen all of them….thanks for the ideas!
Thank you! One reason I’ve set my stories in Ohio is that I don’t have to do tons of research. But then I write mysteries and have to do a ton of research on police and their procedures.