Use This Character in an Ending

I’ve written before that faces grab my attention, suggesting characters or stories to me. So how would you use this character in an ending? The confetti the little girl is throwing made me imagine a speculative fiction story.

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Jay handed me a tea and murmured, “Our friend still spying?”

The cup warmed my gloved hands. “Yes. And he must be getting very bored. All these months of watching us, and Evie has acted like a normal five-year-old the whole time.”

Evie ran with the other children in the park until the sunset, and Jay and I were the last adults sitting on a bench. The man pretending to sketch the park had left a half hour ago.

Evie took each of our hands as we walked home, swinging on our arms.

I said, “How about supper out tonight, Evie? We’ll go to Carsini’s.”

“Can I have extra meatballs?” She looked up at me.

“Of course.”

She clapped her hands and multi-colored sparks flew from between her mittens.

Then she grabbed my hand and Jay’s and bounced and hopped between us until we reached the restaurant.

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What Story is Behind This Ending?

Since my theme this month is endings, my prompts will provide photos that could be used for them. What story is behind this ending? In the comments, tell me what you think has happened to put smiles on the faces of these girls. Or write the last lines of the ending itself, which is what I’m doing.

“So, stepsis.” I twirled a few strands of my curly hair around my finger as we walked through the park. “We beat the Nasties, you got your award, and I might pass AP Chem. What should we do next?”

Natalie twirled some ringlets of her own. “I think we should stop calling each other ‘stepsis’.”

“I’d go along with that, but I really don’t want to see Mom get all weepy about us …” I faked choking sobs “… actually accepting each other as sisters.” I brushed away invisible tears and fanned my face.

“I’m sure Dad will get misty-eyed too.” Natalie grinned. “We’ll do it a supper. They’ll be things to distract them.”

I rolled my eyes. “Like the twins. But good strategy, sis.”

“Thanks, sis.”

We stopped in the middle of the brick path and bumped fists. And since we’d settled on being sisters, a hug seemed right too.

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Why Are Endings Hard to Write?

It might seem odd to have endings as my theme in September instead of December. But if you’re like me, most of your usual habits get sidetracked in the preparations for Christmas. And I think mastering how to end a story is crucial to good writing. When you pick up any book on writing, there’s usually a ton of advice on how to begin a story. Because if you can’t hook readers at the beginning, they will never make it to the end. But endings are just as important as beginnings, but I think they are more difficult to pull off successfully. Why are endings hard to write?

The beginning and middle determine the ending

The ending pulls together all the elements that have come before. So if one of those aren’t working, then the ending will reflect that. With a bad beginning, you only have to go back a few chapters to figure out what’s wrong. If the ending isn’t pulling together, you have much more story to excavate through.

Writers run out of inspiration

The ending is usually the last thing you write for a story. By the time you’ve fought through the beginning and middle, you may feel like you have nothing left to say and just want the whole thing to be over with like a bad cold. With no inspiration to fuel your writing, the ending can come across as rushed or incomplete.

Endings have to surprise and make sense

Accomplishing those two objectives in an ending is what makes it so much harder than a beginning. There are limitless ways to begin a story–with action, a provocative remark, and stirring appeal to the senses–and you have the whole story to build out from that hook.

With an ending, you have to work with what came before in a way that readers will see as logical. But to make the ending a surprise, you have to reveal that logic in an unexpected way. When you can use logic and the unexpected effectively in an ending, you will provide readers with deep satisfaction and the kind of ending they remember with fondness.

So we’ll be exploring endings with all the challenges and rewards. Writers, are endings are hard for you to write? Readers, what are some memorable endings?

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