Book Review of Go Teen Writers: Edit Your Novel

I am reposting this book review of Go Teen Writers: Edit Your Novel to go with this month’s theme of editing. This book is packed with so much good advice that’s it’s worth posting again to give you a second look.

Don’t let the title put you off if you’re an adult. The editing advice in this book is appropriate for any beginning writer. Or even a seasoned writer because it’s always helpful to review or relearn the basics of good writing. The book cover both both macro- and micro-editing. Don’t know what those words mean? Get the book because it will explain that macro- editing is revising the big issues, such as character development and theme. Micro-editing is all the tiny things that need taken care of, like knowing when to insert or remove commas. 

One of the most helpful sections under micro-editing is the chapter on punctuation. Author Jill Williamson sets out the rules from how to punctuate dialogue to how to correctly type and use en-dashes and em-dashes. I would have loved to have had this handy guide earlier in my career.

The other half of the book provides all kinds of advice on how to get published with chapters on how traditional publishing works, how to write a synopsis and a query, find a literary agent, and deal with rejection.

The extra chapters at the end are the kind of bonus material I love. There’s self-editing checklist, brainstorming ideas, and the authors’s list of weasel words and phrases, which are words and phrases each author falls into the habit of using over and over again in their first draft. “Just” is a particular weasel word of mine. When I edit, I have to find them and retain only the ones that actually serve a purpose.

But what if you’re still writing your novel? These lovely authors have you covered with Go Teen Writers: Write Your Novel.

For another recommendation of writing book, click here.

What books on editing do you recommend?

Hey, My Book’s a Finalist!

Very excited to let you know that A Storm of Doubts is a finalist in the YA novel category for the Selah Awards, which is handed out at the Blue Ridge Mountains Christian Writers Conference! My Christmas mystery short story, “A Rose from the Ashes”, which started my Rae Riley mystery series, was a finalist in the short story category in 2020. So I’m thrilled to be nominated for a novel this time. The winners will be announced at the conference at the end of May. I’m hoping to attend

A Storm of Doubts is my second novel. If you’d like to read the series in order, here’s the list.

#1 “A Rose from the Ashes” in Christmas fiction off the beaten path

Nineteen-year-old Rae Riley knows she needs to fulfill her late mother’s dying wish. But she needs even more to find her father. And the man who attacked her mother twenty years ago on Christmas Eve and left her to burn in an abandoned building. And if her father and the attacker are one and the same.

#2 A Shadow on the Snow

Nineteen-year-old Rae Riley can barely believe her gamble paid off. After spending seven months investigating the identity of her father and whether he tried to murder her mother, Rae has been accepted by her dad, Sheriff Walter “Mal” Malinowski IV, and his immediate family with open hearts. And for the first time in her life, Rae is making friends, jamming with three cute cops who play outlaw country music.But someone is leaving Rae threatening notes, reminding her of her late mother’s notorious past when Bella Rydell wrecked homes and lives during the few years she lived in rural Marlin County, Ohio. Fearing the threats will make Mal and his family reject her, Rae investigates the mystery on her own. But her amateur sleuthing may cost her the father she’s always wanted when the stalker changes targets and takes dead aim at Mal.

#3 A Storm of Doubts

Her dad said nothing could change their relationship. But what if he wasn’t her dad?

Summer gets off to a rocky start for twenty-year-old Rae Riley when the ex-wife of family friend Jason Carlisle claims their youngest child isn’t his and Rae’s con man uncle Troy returns to Marlin County, Ohio. Rae is already at odds with her father, Sheriff Walter “Mal” Malinowski, over her desire to help people in trouble. When she extends that help to Uncle Troy and Jason’s ex-wife, she and Mal clash even more.

Then the ex-wife disappears, and Jason and his brother Rick are two of the main suspects. As Rae and her Aunt Carrie, a private investigator hired to protect Jason’s kids, work to discover what really happened, Rae wrestles with Troy’s insinuations that she may be calling the wrong Malinowski “Dad.”

Bonus Story: “Bovine” in Ohio Trail Mix: Adventures and Inspiration along the Ohio Literary Trail

This story isn’t exactly part of the Rae Riley series because Rae only plays a minor role in it. But other members of her family take center stage when an elitist author comes to a backwater Ohio county, thinking he’s found the perfect setting for the perfect crime.

The Artist Vs. the Editor

What do I mean by the artist vs. the editor? Well, this month’s theme is all about how to edit our stories. But within one writer is–or should be–both the creative artist and the analytical editor. Both personalities are critical for creating a story readers will enjoy. But the artist and the editor don’t play well together, so it’s important for writers to recognize when to hang out with the one and when to send the other packing.

First Draft Torture

I find writing the first draft of any story almost torture. Because my pesky internal editor won’t leave my artist alone. I can be in the middle of a conversation between several characters, and my editor is saying, “You’re using ‘said’ too much. Put in some action tags” when my goal at this point is to establish the fact that Mrs. Murphy saw Old Man Willis sneaking around the abandoned Simmons house a few hours before it burned. And all my editor can see is that I’ve used too many “saids”!

But When the First Draft is Finished …

It’s time to roll my sleeves, put on my hard hat, and do some serious reconstruction and polishing. This not the time for my artist to skip in and tell me, “You know, Mrs. Murphy is a fascinating character. You should add more scenes with her.” Or “Do you really want Mayor Haggerty to be the murderer? Old Man Willis might be better.”

The artist can distract me with tantalizing variations on the story I’ve completed. But if I’m working on a deadline, I have to send her off to a field to frolic with unicorns and the Eater Bunny.

In My Experience

I’ve had much greater trouble with my editor during the first draft phase than I do with the artist in the editorial phase. Probably because the artist is so exhausted by the time I get to “The End”, that she appreciates a vacation.

In reality, writers can’t totally separate their artistic side from their analytical side, but I’ve found I have to focus primarily on one or the other. I don’t mind doing a few edits as I write my first draft. Or writing a new scene when my editor sees a need. But if I give both sides of the writing process equal weight at the same time, writing becomes drudgery, and I wear myself out.

So in the battles of the artist vs. the editor, who do you have the most trouble with?

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Write a Poem about March

My theme this month is editing. Since that’s a difficult theme to provide writing prompts for, my prompts will be about March and any other fun topic I can think of. So write a poem about March. The poem below is one a I wrote several years ago, but it still captures my attitude toward March.

When it’s hot and cold

Rain and snow

Winter and spring

And lasts forever

It must be

MARCH

Let me know how you feel about March in the comments.

For more prompts about months and seasons, click here.

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